always speechless to read your poem and I can't comment so i make this

keep your desire to follow the rithm
don't make your intuition into something interupted
so move your soul into the wave
hold your drink and take it
don't break the glass
it can hurt your hand

Shake your body follow your feeling
insting everyone has similarity
so we dance in different song but some rithm

enjoy your life as a wave of wind
When wind blow to the north,follow wind tail
to get your speed
dont face tornado foward
you will be broken and damage your kites
keep calm and enjoy your play