Beautiful Night
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Your tender whispers smooch my cheeks
Like a baby, you clutch so near
A cover you serve from the hustles
Always taking me away from the bustles
The croaking of frogs nearby soothing,
Their frequency similar to shooting
You’re a bliss from the One Most High
My soul rejoice whenever you’re nigh
Your deep blue face sparkling always with light
Your tiny little accomplices looking so bright
In your silence, I find so big inspiration,
I feel on my shoulder rests the fate of a nation.
You smile upon me with all your might,
A blessing you are, oh beautiful night.
Take me to dreamland in your arms
Where I feel safe, free from any harm.
Smooch? For real? That word doesn't fit at all, mate. Great effort and theme. Keep trying on the wording. Some are poetic, others are erotic, and others just don't fit.
Thanks. Some things just come spontaneously. And not understanding the concepts behind some of the lines could make them look not fitting at all ☺.
Thanks all the same mate 😁ni
Fair enough. It's just the sound a smooch makes, especially if it's on your ear, tends to be annoying more than pleasurable.
Lol. 😂 .. Now I get you...
Its so wonderfull
Thank you