hi @bombmom0414

This is wonderful poetry, but a question is asked here. You know, who wrote when they wrote it, just to raise words and let us understand? I personally love songs and I would be happy to know who wrote this and whether it's yours or that you took it from somewhere else. If it's yours you're a really talented person and I think you should try your writing elsewhere as well that might give you a chance to post them
@ravivshachr