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RE: My Undesirable Joy (An Original Poem)
Very melancholy bordering on just depressing. Descriptions were very nice. Poetry is not my strong suit though I like it. It seems like this is one that needs to be read a few times. The end takes a turn and I found myself reading it again to figure it out. I'm pretty sure that is the point of a good poem. Good job!
Thanks for your comment mate! Glad you liked it