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RE: A sigh of your skin - Original poem -100-days-poetry-challenge-day-19

in #poetry6 years ago

Now, small pieces fall from her skin peeled,
Dehydrated petals that drop broken skin,
revealing another with more brightness, than the one that falls.
Today, she requests another invasion of her personal space.

A sensual and provocative write, zeleira:)

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And to think that all that sensuality envelops daily that process of careful work of bees, who tirelessly expand life with their dance. I appreciate your comment, @prydefoltz, as always, it is a privilege to have you as a helping hand in my path as a poet's apprentice.

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