reBoot Camp (Original)

in #poetry9 years ago

I can still feel the heat,
Wavy lines rising off the grinder
And dancing around recruits
Whose foreheads were wet with
Wavy lines of sweat falling.

Mornings on that asphalt
We marched until we knew
That what we were before
Was simple programming
That could be altered.

As first in my company
I led from the front,
The full assault started on me
And I, in turn, guided the others,
It's why it's called boot camp.

When they've finished the programming
And we ants now know nothing more
Than the impulses and dog whistles
That make up our new software,
We are booted up on our new OS.

Our BIOS flashed,
Reality changed,
They call all this what's "real"
And what we leave on those foreign shores
The fruits of freedom.

I can still feel the heat,
Wavy lines rising off my mind
And dancing around the code,
The military software uselessly uploaded
To an already partitioned hard drive.

Mornings since those asphalt days
I walk and walk until I know
That what I was before and have been since
Is all programming
That I have altered.


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@prufarchy

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I'm actually enjoyed the rhythms of marching, but hated boot camp in general.

We're The Boys of company C
Learning what it is to be
Soldiers one two
Soldiers three four
Soldiers one two
Three four three four

haha I just reread my comment, when I said I hated bootcamp in general I wasn't referring to your poem I was referring to my own experiences in bootcamp

Not having a good day today my second comment ended up as an edit in the first.

hahaha I didn't even catch that!

Sorry for the slow response, it's a busy day in the meaningless ad world

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It's perfect that you didn't put a picture with this one. Truly excellent. As is your Osmosis poem, which I've been trying to let my voting power amp up a bit before I hit it. Also I recommended it to the new @htooms surrogate voter, I hope they see it in time :)

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