I'm so excited to see you went ahead and put an entry in, this is some fine poetry! I know you're new, but you may want to take a look at tagging so this work can be properly seen by the community :)

"ifiruledtheworld" as a tag doesn't help get this out there much, and to have your poem show up in the poetryslamchallenge feed you want to tag it as such (don't worry this time, I'll make sure this entry doesn't get forgotten).

Just a few tips to encourage. Great work, glad to have you in the challenge !