It's Not Fragnant as Jasmine Flower
It's Not Fragnant as Jasmine Flower
The yearning stabs the bottom of my heart
Turning blue for a moment
It calls other memories
Trap me in this loneliness
My gaze begins meaningless
Look at the stars
I keep silence in thousand of languages
Hope to go, but not from the heart
Make me lonely and isolated
Rave my heart
Still be awaited
No reason, no doubt
Still loving
Never get tired
But, baby..
I find something's different
It's not as good as yesterday
I am sure
You're my favorite
But it's over now
Your love
It's not as warm as yesterday
Your affection
It's not as fragnant as Jasmine flower
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It's a very emotional poem
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I make it as deep as possible to make the readers feel too
You're right
the best thing is make the readers feel too about what you write
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Nice poetry. Really nice. followed you. Follow back
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I followed you follow back and rate me on my last post
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I really enjoyed reading this poetry , I wish you could see my poem and advise me that it was wrong .. https://steemit.com/poetry/@mahmoudalrefaie/poem-in-my-soul-a-girl-p1
Thanks so much :)
I will take my time to see yours