Rise Phoenix Heart - Original Motivational Poem

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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_Rise Phoenix Heart _

You have swung on the cusp of life's inequity
and conquered, watch
The phoenix emerges from sweet ash
Reborn, Renewed, rejuvenated
Celestial Wings beat down, illuminated by the sun
Leaving far behind the hot remnant dust
That meets the sky and is swept away by the lulling wind

Let your calling ring out
Where inhibition is dead
Reflecting, you can let your full colours gleam
See the flamed one in its valour
He flies
reaching for the edges of the world
For with Phoenix Heart we rise

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This is a nice concept, well developed.
It reminds me of a short, haiku-like, epigram I wrote some year ago:

Phoenix, Osiris, Jesus,
nell'arco di una sola notte
di nuovo insieme i pezzi.

(Translation from italian:
Phoenix, Osiris, Jesus,
in a single night
the pieces together again.)

thanks, lovely

Very nice and good choice of words!

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