Unloved (Reversed Poetry Attempt)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

WARNING: A non-writer and her first attempt to do poetry.

I am unloved.

It is foolish to believe that,
Love protects, trusts, hopes and perseveres.

It is however true that,
Love is proud, envious and self-seeking.

Never have I believed that,
Love fuels my soul from within and keeps me alive.

Then I realize that this may be a shock,
my heart is vulnerable as it is wretched.

and it may be so true that,
a concealed and deceitful heart is lost and wasted.

I do not think that,

I am of value.

Now, please read from bottom to top.

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Behind those lines

The writer got tired of life, walking around the world like a robot and feeling heartless.

Her incapability to open her heart again was far from reality as she lives by the motto:

life should not be taken seriously.

The writer believes that everything she does was and will never be good enough and so she decided to play with words.

Her words were a little hasty and shallow but her way out is only through writing things down on a sheet of paper.

Funny thing is that with the rise of technology, she realized that living a life virtually is something she could do to ease the burden of life.

Her way to let her heart out and in hope to encourage others that feeling everything , the good, bad, worse and everything in between is not bad at all. One should just learn to wallow with life with the Most High God who fought battles one doesn't even know.

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