Desire(Poem)
All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter,
Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
-Tolkien
Desire(Poem)
Fire fueled furious passion,
Dark rimmed lips searching.
Exploring every rise and curve,
Finding serenity in mutual embrace.
Hotly, heavy breaths heaving,
In time with a rampant heart.
Beating unto bursting with,
Exhilaration from each brush.
My skin burns with searing love,
Chained to you by dreams.
Patient longing until it may,
Pass into perfection for us.
That's intense! I like the passion of course and the attention to sounds, the way the words seem to breathe at the same time you do. Keep it on :)
Thank you! I wanted to establish a racing pace to invoke the rushed, breathlessness associated with a passionate relationship.
Yes, exactly what I felt, the poem comes and go in strong waves :)
This is beautiful, your place of words is top-notch
Thank you for your kind compliment.
Wonderful work! Very skillful crafted and written!
Thanks, I apppreciate the comment.
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Thank you so very much! I feel honored and blessed to be a part of this group of talented poets!
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OOOO this is hot! Love it :p
lol thanks I appreciate that!
Steamy, hot poetry. I LIKE IT. Verrrrry much!
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks as always for being so supportive!