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RE: Tidal Garden - Heavenly Haiku

in #poetry • 7 years ago

Beautiful photo! Wow!

I've been thinking a lot about haiku since I started with Mizu No Oto contest. It seems to me one trick is to see the simplest aspects of things, so simple they are difficult to see at all. Your haiku gives the elements of color, water and hunger as natural and right. Nice job!

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     7 years ago (edited)

    It seems to me one trick is to see the simplest aspects of things, so simple they are difficult to see at all.

    Spot on owasco. That's the mastery of haiku for sure. Lol, it's also why people who don't write haiku see them and say things like 'thats easy, I could do that'... because great haiku seem simple, but it's getting that perfect moment crystallized in efficient yet transcendental imagery that's far from easy.

    Thanks for checking out my poem :)

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