iROBOT!

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)

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I'm exhausted, it feels like nothing is working out.

In the midst of this storm, I can only wish that peace come.

I have lived void of love.
The woman in my life winced in agony for lack of affection.
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I lack the affection to have you loved, my dear ann.

I was a human before some mean scientist with bikini bottoms used me.

I am a steel machine, they gave me a shell now.

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Even breathing is hard now.

I never listened when mother told me.

How can I be your honey while I am so bitter.

My dearest ann, in you I sense a bleeding heart and you overwork my sensory.

I pounder on this music till my database is fed.

The rock of classical jazz and a hint of hip hop.

My eardrums play the lead role, because I am listening.

Hear this song, My dear. There is a valid gist in it.

Crank the volume high like the recipe....
of vodka in many pages.

My dearest, now you are liken to fading daisies.....

Don't you dare squander your feelings

I'm producing a sound warning by beat making....

Slamming shut every opening

I fail in my attempt to be temperate, or sober for my temper was magnified.

I have hate. I can read it like hieroglyphs or a psychologist, mentally.

It wasn't meant to be a ballad, I hope you resent my tone.

Who'd cheer from those empty chairs??

The size of this audience feed on my esteem and grow fat tummy similar to the hall in which it sits.

My countenance is blue since this is a code red ish..

My pipe contains ash, and I don't even imbibe it.

Fill me a tumbler, fill it with contentment.

I am void of love, my dearest ann.

And I must complete my machinery task.

Those scientists ruined my emotional trigger.

There is nothing left for you here.
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Whooooah. Thats some deep stuff my man :)
I really like how you were able to center your post. it make it look really great

All thanks to you buddy.
You're practically my steemit coach.

@organic using the wrong tags can get you flagged by steemians, also not putting references on pictures that are not originally yours can be regarded as plagiarism

much Thanks for the tip. I'm gonna quickly source this one.

I'll vouch that he had good intentions and is just new. We're helping him figure this stuff out over in Minnow Support Project, but thanks for looking out for the good of the community.

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I love this poem, the pov of a robot is excellent!

My dearest ann, in you I sense a bleeding heart and you overwork my sensory.

One of my favorite line in the poem!

Following you now.

I'm happy you found it appealing.
Thank you very much, and I'm following you too.

Very much, and thank you for following!

Wow, this is really amazing! Do you often write poetry?

yeah I do, kubby. when the inspiration kick in.
As my crush, I'm really glad you like it.

As your crush I hope you know that I love ❤️. I asked a few friends to stop by and give your poem the attention it deserves. Hope I you feel appreciated

I must confess, I feel Overly appreciated, my dear kubby. And I appreciate the supoort too.❤ I'm grateful.

Excellent, if you could go to discord right now and listen to the radio. In the radio chat room let them know I brought you I might possibly win a prize and you would be AWESOME!

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