IMMORTALITY

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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On my quest for originality. I drew this on PICSART

From friend to fiend. You moved too quick. I reckon you were the sick one, but how on earth did I get affected??? what kind of drug does it take to get loose from you're sickening grip. I have had a sufficient bout of your core racket. Its best I save my self.

All your efforts will go limp and leave you short of satisfaction. Through your cuts, I decline to bleed. Oh immortality sweet. You've drained the anxiety. I feel no hunger, urge nor ailment, thirst can't kill me, ever since my heartbeat stop!

Soft as wind, yet I'm strong. And a broken heart, I do feel not. you told me to do you a favour and jump And yes, jump I did. into immortality sweet. my only regret is that It took so long.

Immortality, My current state of mind. Ruled by the monarchy of confidence. I am no longer querulous. All my intents will be exercised as much. Though you left me in wreck. Every debris I have swept beneath the carpet. From here, I watch you fade. From here, I write a new page

THANKS FOR STOPPING BY!!

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From here i watch you fade, from here i open new page nice lines. Really enjoyed this work

I bet I'd be very sad, if you didn't find it enjoyable.
Thank you!

Good luck on that new page. I'm just starting one of those too

Its such a delight to find you here ma'am.!! New pages are often necessary. personally, I do not advocate abandoning hope simply because of a bad experience. Things happen and life must go on.

thanks for commenting.

something different to read - thanks for your effort!

You're very welcome!

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