Poem / Tears

in #poetry7 years ago

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Look into the sadness of what we all are
Cries flying in the moonlight of earth's winged
tip that travels from the hierarchy's core
Fleeing the soft salty tears of being

To the other side of chances afar
The fear growing inside one's heart and soul
No other may converse in countanence
No other may fear the steep tiered of divide
From wanting lust to creative renown

First noises grow silent are all the sounds
Of misty fog on the foreground that think
There is no power in climbing columns
In tiers that ladder our emotion to blink
In tear stained eyes, too tired to ask for

A moment of clarity in the midst
Our minds fears, our heart recoils, our souls miss

By: Shannon

Thank you for reading my poem, I hope it touched your heart! If you like it, please comment, upvote, resteem and want to hear more poems you can follow me here :3 @Oceancoinz

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Oh, what longing for a better world..... lovely prose.

LOL, thanks for the vocabulary. I read your reply and was like, "What is prose?" . hehehe But, I read that it means "without metrical structure". Then I was like, "What is metrical structure?". And , thank you google dictionary, it means that it is a poem with stressed and unstressed syllables. < I can't stop smiling> Then, I thought, "Wow, in the midst of feeling sad someone actually made me laugh!". Thank you. I'm learning a lot about the structure of poems and stuff. It's awesome that you can take your feelings and form them into words, ya know? You're funny.

Lol, now you're making me laugh! I don't know about you, but when I switch from crying to laughing a blubbering mess ensues.

Liked it pretty very much

Thank you very much!! Followed.

You are always welcome

:)

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Very classic, i really love your daily poem friend😊 here is a upvote and resteem for my dear friend @oceancoinz keep it up buddy :)

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Nice poem! Wish I knew how write em. Best I can do is make words like ball can fall etc. You know like rhyming stuff. XD

Such a lovely poem ..i dont know if its coincidence ..i really love your poem
https://steemit.com/sorrow/@sandaraclark/a-song-that-reminds-me-to-my-angel

Deep stuff you got going on over here...

I like it;)

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This is the best poem you wrote it until now

Great poem and moving. Ur really tallented.
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