such an awesome piece. am touched with these words 'For it is you,
my Eurydice,
who pulled me to life,
to sound and fury.'
you became my judge and jury
to determine my fate but faith aint straight. wish I could continue....
bro keep the good work up, poetry is living and we bless to have a poet like you in it.
Ha! That was amusing. Glad you liked it :)
You'll notice that I don't go for rhymes all that often. They are a crutch that helps guide you, but it also limits you.