Dammit, every time I try to let my voting power go up to 100, just before it makes it, someone just has to post something cool and interesting. Coming from a sometimes-poet, your poem was really good, the imagery and pace it set, with its methodical, steady beat was very good.

I'm a sucker for poems that paint a picture and tell a story, and an even bigger sucker for poems that feature extremely dark themes.

Thanks for sharing, you gained a follower :)