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RE: In The River of Dreams

in #poetry6 years ago

I literally had to calmly take the poem in bits just to absorb its full glamour. I love your choice of register and the vocabulary was fully in tandem with it.

The poem had a flow. Progressing steadily from the mental perception of the damsel, then to a bridge of distance, a welcome and then the vision of the future.

Saying I love this poem is an understatement.

Whoever this poem was originally written for is surely a beautiful roman goddess with awesome virtues beyond the threshold of human comprehension.
Good work bro.

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