Forgotten Flower :: Poem-A-Day :: Day #3
Eyes closed
I still see me
An image burned
Embraced
I turn upside
Inside out
Tell you more
Than words
Darkness lights
Life between sounds
Sobs and laughter
Restless motions
Green hope
Snow in bloom
Eyes closed
I still see me
An image burned
Embraced
I turn upside
Inside out
Tell you more
Than words
Darkness lights
Life between sounds
Sobs and laughter
Restless motions
Green hope
Snow in bloom
speechless....
Poetry always tells more than words. Yours brought the full emotions brought on by winter. I love the phrase “Darkness lights life” Yin and Yang, Darkness light, good and evil - even the seasons remind us these are all part of life and have a purpose. We just need to embrace it.
Hello @nobyeni. It is a beautiful poetry. I invite you to read mine. Greetings.
Very cool... short, but sweet and powerful too.
These lines resonated with me - We say so much without words.
Keep up the great work.
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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Beautiful evocation of times gone by, wanting to relive them. Fascinating poem, @nobyeni. I loved. I embrace your poetry. I am also participating as "intermediate" ... I follow you!
'Eyes closed
I still see me..'
This imagery and the abstractness is a beauty to the mind.
This contest is really an inspiration