Get Wit Me (Based on a True Story) [Back when I wrote Songs] I MISS MUSIC :(

in poetry •  last year

Song: Get Wit Me
Written By: Greg Lewin a.k.a J.A_
Album: Based on a True Story (my poems are music)

Verse
I can see that your hurtin
You've given all your time an your lovin.
But he don't deserve you,
Coz he don't spend no time hangin with you.

Call him on the phone,
Coz your there home alone.
And he don't even answer.
Girl its late at night and you need him right,
But he don't seem to feel you.

(Chorus)
Girl even though I'm just your friend,
An I'm probably his real best friend.
Girl you need to leave an let him be.
Girl even though we talk as friends
An he says I'm his best friend.
You need to stop an get wit me.

Girl even though I'm just your friend,
An I'm probably his real best friend.
Girl you need to leave an let him be.
Girl even though we talk as friends
An he says I'm his best friend.
You need to stop an get wit me.

(Rap)
Girl its a brand new year an he ain't relatin
Its 2000 love an girl you complainin
2007 thats when he was saying he wantin you in his life you the chick he ratin.
Now here comes the time but your heart he's playin.
All the things you did for him now your heart feels caved in.
Even got mad at you bro coz you thought he was hatin
Woulda smashed his face for this fake love of a fake thug
Who wouldn't give you no love.

(talking)
Ohh girl, you deserve so much better
Mo better, the one.

(Repeat Chorus)

End

V.O.C.A.B "Words Speak"
Vision+Opportunity+Creativity+Attitude+Beliefs

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The content is real!! I love it. We come from a different time of music. It's never too late to pursue your dream. If you can think, believe it, embrace it because you will achieve it.

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Amen! to that.

Its the bridge to that time that we are from that's missing in today's music. 60's, 70's, 80's, 90's and early 00's had a connection (a bridge) a spiritual soulful connection.
Nowadays music lacks this (some by the way) Music is an instrument through which an experience can be shared, but if it lacks sincerity and heart then a nothing-ness is shared and hence no spiritual connection.

I'm looking to sort out a home studio next year when all things come together. My dream still lives.

Thanks for taking the time to connect. Peace!

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