'Dos Lobos' an attempt at me being poetic

nathanthewise (54)in #poetry • 5 years ago (edited)

Dos Lobos

I got Caught up in the rapture
was Freshly toasted and ready to be roasted
a want to be poem
a want to be artist
tripping up of your lips
as your face gets tight around the corners
and you sighhhh from the walk out in nature
unwinding of the dealing and feeling
the bombardment of emotion
the stacked deck where the house always wins
taking the next step in a different direction
a healthy dose of vitamin c from Raven n Chief
my 3-d printed soul has solidified into greatness
all thanks to oneness and the harnessing of chi
the shine from iron as it licks my soul clean
I’ve been bitten by the string of keys typed together
A feel for the scenic
A feel for the stoic
the tarnished, weathered, warn and ridden
the heated
the worked up..
and the feeling defeated

How I read it via soundcloud

#writing #freewrite #animals #artwork

5 years ago in #poetry by nathanthewise (54)

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