Starry Night - Poetry
It was nothing like the rest,
Every night,
Every dream,
The same delightful loop.
It was a dream,
Of a world,
With yellow skies,
Grey sands,
Everything a fairy tale.
A warm rush of goodness,
Mixing with a sudden chill,
It was a feeling to remember,
To the last days.
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Good one. Poetry is not very well accepted in this platform I guess. But please carry on.
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I liked your poem. I think poetry is well accepted on this platform but it takes a lot of patience to get established and have a following. May I suggest that you don't put the tag (Poetry) in the title and try to use a photo and title that grabs the reader's interest - what you did was fine, but you don't want just fine, you want to capture the reader's attention. I often spend more time searching for a photo than writing my poem. The photo says more visually than you might expect and it can be used to illustrate another aspect of the poem. The same goes for the title- time spent on these two elements of your post will make a big difference . Hope this helps.
I am really glad that you took the time to read and comment on what I wrote. It's certainly more special to me, since I love almost everything that you have written. Thank you and I shall work on what you suggested.
You're very welcome
good work - keep trying!
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A good feeling to this poem
Thank you for reading. I am happy to hear that you did feel better reading this.
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