Along the coast - Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

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Cool breeze tickles you happy,
While you ride along the coast.

Warmth of the perfect sunshine,
Keeps up active and alive.

Fond memories of the future,
Coupled with the hope of the past.

All that the things that matter,
Are right in your palm.

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Cool breeze tickles you happy,

Fond memories of the future,

I really loved these lines. I love the concept of remembering the future. Nice write.

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hello, enjoyed your poem. this is short and precise

This is one of my least favorite ones. You could check out some of the other ones, I like them better:)

i like your poem. live and life, the great words option. i like poem. wanna be like you. and a feel good heart. like it @mydivathings

Thank you again:)

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