orig-poetry-# 3 - i need to love and be love-by mrblu

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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I am a man who needs the warmth
of a woman's passionate love,
and the tenderness of her kiss.
love is something that everyone

In this world needs.
I need to be love,for to be in
Love is beyond compare.
Filling my need to be loved is

Something that seems to have passed me by.
the depths of my soul are left to bleed.
there is no happiness, no joy
the cool evening breeze,
the loneliness that i felt
is something that you just can't

explain or put into words.
today, i set here looking on at the sky,
thinking and hoping that someday i will finally to have
someone in life that really does care not only on physical
way of love,but the love that is real,someone to love,someone
to care,someone to know you more,someone to hold you
when you're so cold at night,someone to give it all.someone
that will catch you when you are fallen, that makes you feel
alright.someday,somehow,some time,someplace,
i will found you.as i walk on this journey
i realize that there is nothing
as great as being in
love and need
to be
loved


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Beutiful! Thank you for this!

@cron i gues i'm the one feels like that..on my teens years ..we need to love and be love

This is a real love story hope you found one @mrblu

@godswill thanks for wonderful comments

Deep longing thoughts in there and really worth living with and through. Thank you so very much for sharing your heart with us. Namaste :)

thanks @eric-boucher its my pleasure to share my thoughts and feelings as a man who need to be love and be love..

thanks for visiting on my page-i really appreciated your wonderful comments buddy,

Namaste:)

Well done! I really felt the emotions in your poem.great post!

@cejero021 thanks for the wonderful comments

Upvoted 😊

upvoted.

Thanks @lesleslyfay


Hello mate one thing that I can advice with you after reading your poem is that learn to wait :D

The destined girl you want to be on your life will actually come.

Don't forget to pray also :D

thanks @jaderpogi-^_^ thanks for the advice bro

-Love is important treasure in human Life.-

-Do not Search love- it will Come-

-Namaste :)

-Up voted @mrblu


Very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing this. The latter part shaped like a heart. Very special. :-)

thanks @wangwenjing thanks for visiting my page.

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