You aptly capture the exhilaration of kite flying in your poem.
NOTE: I think you erred with “fluttered” and meant “flustered” instead. Flags flutter, people get flustered.
You aptly capture the exhilaration of kite flying in your poem.
NOTE: I think you erred with “fluttered” and meant “flustered” instead. Flags flutter, people get flustered.
Thanks!
@momzillanc
for pointing it out. But, I don't think it's a mistake. It seems quiet confusing So, I look for the dictionary.
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It’s your poetic voice. But, applying “fluttered” to a person’s behavior isn’t in the common vernacular. That might be why it is confusing.