The Nights We Shared [ORIGINAL POEM @mindhunter]steemCreated with Sketch.

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Your bloom was like a burst of life

You were buried so soft in my arms

Knowing purpose and meaning

We walked beyond the stars


But we age

And the world is a little older

And what comes as a rush of love

Must leave in pain

All treasures we found

Aged and faded


But the nights we shared

Beat like drums in a heart somewhere

Traces of our greatest days lost

That fade out to alien stars



Source VisitScotland


The Scottish Dark Sky Observatory, near Dalmellington, Ayrshire.

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A beautiful poem that looks into the soul of heartbreak itself :'(

I'm glad it touched your heart @thewiredneuron Thank you. Thank you.

Thanks @mindhunter. Sums up the eternal human cycle of love and loss beautifully.

As George Harrison sings 'All Things Must Pass' ;)

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