You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: TWO TIRED VERSES: POETRYView the full contextmdbrantingham (59)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)"Hissing off the tale like a punctured lung..." Damn. This is good work. Resteemed.
Thanks man for the love. I am glad you liked it.
Shouldn't 'veeses' be 'verses'?
Yeah it should that is why tired is there but let me change it so it doesn't seem like I failed grammar.
Thank you for spotting the error.