I haven’t Forgotten You at allsteemCreated with Sketch.

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dweller of my poetic vastness

I’ve never forgotten you at all

You visited me once upon a verse

Reviving the memory of love

I responded with a verse of passion

Embracing today its lines

I almost, my dearest of all

Perished of longing and despair

Affection exhausted my script

And fondness ignited its ink

Tears defeated my poem, and

Came pleading for mercy

precious it said

I can’t handle your love

I love you, my soul mate

For the heart adores its captivation

I don’t deny my affection

Suppressing my heart’s irritation

So avoid false accusation

In my heart is a raging fire

In my chest a huge sorrow

Bigger than a galaxy’s mass

I’ve only my tears to moan

To your vision for leaving me alone

Saying: “I missed you more

So grant me a generous glance

And accept my bashful stance

Visiting you every time

From the garden of charming rhyme

To offer you a beautiful bloom

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This was really amazing! Thanks so much for sharing such a great passion and love through your words! (Sorry, I was moving house and was not able to check Steemit for almost 6 days.)

How are you brother . It's good to see you today

wonderful poem. So many pleasent feelings. :) I restreemed it.

Thank you so much . I am happy that you admire this poem. I wish you a happy day

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Thank you so much

Great!! You are very talented!... There is great sorrow . yet great beauty in this poem

Thank you so much

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