"The world in the abyss"

in poetry •  last year 

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Matte picture
and strange faces with him.
They lie and destroy,
they throw themselves like hungry dogs.
All together

Bloody sky
where the sun does not rise.
There is fear in the eyes
and emptiness.
They can freeze fire.

Crushed, lonely
pushed into the abyss.
Red flooded
the world cried softly.





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Skies like this always make me question life and it’s purposs but beautiful !!

When I look at the bloody sky, sometimes I have the impression that it is a strong message. The bloody sky struck my delicate strings of the soul and pierced me. Thank you my friend :-)

:)

Hi Margaret, will this sky bring good weather or will there be thunder and lightning ? Will there be heavy rain ? For some places rain will be appreciated... its just how we look at it.
And do not forget; after rain comes sunshine ☀️

We have a lot of rains and thunderstorms here. that's why the sky looks like it looks.
Honestly, it scared me for the first time.

i really like your poetry.........your every poem has some meaningful theme.......and always you use the perfect photo...that's mostly impress me.....best of luck........

I am deeply appreciate :)

Crushed, lonely
pushed into the abyss.
Red flooded
the world cried softly.

Really wonderful write, Margaret:)

I am so appreciate my friend. Have a beautiful day with blue sky and full of sun ☀️

beautiful writing and what a gorgeous image tip!

Thank you so much my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday :-)

you to have a great day

Good poetry! Amazing sky with bloody color! Great shot! ;)

Thank you so much my sis. The sky really scared me :)

You're welcome! ;)

good poems friends, poems that tell about violence and struggle of life, success always with your poems friend, I always support you.

Great image! Always great writing..thnx.

Thank you so much :)

so sweeet nature,my dear friend @margaretwise,i like it this post all time,thanks for share,

Thank you

a beautiful poem, world always cry softly.

Indeed, thank you so much.

your poetry and nature both are really awesome😍😍

Thank you

Wonderful poetry my dear 😍

Thank you very much my friend :)

Beautifully written poem so good to see that thanks for sharing

Thank you for reading my friend ;)

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Whau, what a nice colors, great post my dear!

Thank you my dear ;)

it make me happy to see this wow i really missed reading the posts :)

HAHA, nice to see you again my friend :)

The sky is beautiful with it’s bloody get up.... and wonderful poetry....matches the bloody sky...

Thank you that you like my poetry.

the bloody sky looks really fantastic

Thank you ;)

What an amazing sky!!

Thank you :)

So good dear this was excellent to read :)

I am so glad my friend :) Thank you

Wow! That is a bloody sky! Awesome!!

Thank you. I am so glad that you like it so much. It inspired me so much ;)

oh my god brilliant creativity dear

Thank you very much :)

Very disturbing sky. Must have been an abrupt temperature change that day? The paints are amazing...

More rain and thunder storms in Panama. You noticed very well my friend :) Thank you :) Have a fantastic Sunday.

The world at the end of death, it's terrible,Why do you give a title like that.

When I look at the bloody sky, sometimes I have the impression that it is a strong message. The bloody sky struck my delicate strings of the soul and pierced me. I still believe in the goodness of this world, but sometimes looking at the sky I have the impression of darkness.

sometimes it is very scary, because the color is like that.

Indeed ;)

i like this post !

the picture ..the creepy as if the world has come to an end!

I had the same feelings.

Your poem confirms my fear of that red sky photo!
But the sky is indeed very beautiful. Yet your poem was so strong and unrelenting in getting to the end of the chapter.

Fear has passed me from the feet to the top of my head, hence my inspiration for a poem

  ·  last year (edited)

This is serious! Pray tell me why such fear came to pass!

Did you just have a vision of what is to come?!
You must be psychic too!?

I hope you have banished it away completely!
Be well and calm!

Great poetry, up to your usual high standard my friend @margaretwise!

Thank you very kindly my lovely friend :)