"Hate" by @margaretwise - My invitation to Poemchallenge, enjoy your writing. Join us :)

in #poetry5 years ago


Hate ... what a negligent feeling
A considerable amount is born in the head
Makes eyes appear with fog
And every dark thought moves every second.
Is this a disease? He can say happy
But his fart can be tricky
Hate, because a false one can be
He can pretend that he loves and live in aggression
Hate can also crush your heart into stone
And only contempt for cruel carries inside
He can also take revenge for the whole world
He will be worse than his brother for his neighbour
However, obvious questions arise
That God created everything that is beautiful
He created love, friendship, euphoria and sadness
Is it a creation of hatred that has this effect?
Can you call it something beautiful, needed?
Give a feeling of indifference and relative?
Is it good or good for good?
Is it just for someone to remedy it?
Is it simply our free will
Manipulates everyone around?
Hmm ...

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lovely post :) Cheers!

Hi! What’s game up?!
I am kinda looking for spring flowers! Yet the snow storm is unabated!
What life has in store for me?!

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Thank you so much :)

Well described about “Hate” through your “poem”! Great!

I agree with you, “Hate can also crush our heart into stone”…. And I think, it would be a happy world if we don’t hate each other.

Beautiful photo, my lovely sis! I like it! Great shot!

Hope you both are doing fine! ;)

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