Untitledmamadini (56)in #poetry • 9 years ago Baby, I’m blue not soft or light or pale I’m midnight dark You can’t see me here lamp black blue night You wanna think on me like that hot in the night well, I’m turning and you can’t save me hell, you can’t even see me! #onehumanbasket #mamadini #moody
These words have venom, thick with feeling, unnerving with a heart sting.
You know how moody I can get, JP.... <3
Nicely written @mamadini
Thank you Kindly @sgtechservices :)
Barely see u! ;-)
<3
Spicy! Another favorite of mine! <3
YAY... I'm moody today, best days for me to write. <3
LOL.. I saw that "moody" tag :D <3
lol ;)
I liked how the cool colors contrasted with the single mention of the 'hot' line. It was almost like a lopsided battle. Nice write.
Thank you, Moe. I was in battle mode for sure. ha.
Very mysterious!
Well thank you, @hayevo. :) I like Mysterious.