A Better Man…

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


A Better Man…

The right woman by your side
there's nothing you can't do
no matter what life
decides to put you through

whatever she does
she does for you
and in return
you do for her too

the way that she knows
exactly what you need
comes natural to her
truly a rare breed

her undying loyalty
unconditional love
is hard to believe
its what you dreamed of

inspiring your best
not judging your dreams
never plays games
and says what she means

she knows what she wants
deserves only the best
always has your back
doesn't dwell on the rest

her presence alone
pushes you to achieve
with her in your life
its hard not to succeed

why she picked you
that day she said hello
luck fate destiny --
you may never know

the strength and courage
you witness each day
never ceases to amaze you
it just blows you away

some how some way
its not hard to understand
plain and simple
she makes you.., a better man.


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Thanks.., I'd love to hear it put to a beat!

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Thanks so much!

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Thought I might hear from you... :))
...and no doubt about it!

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and a wise one too... Thanks @dobartim!

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Just speak from the heart.., and Im sure it will be beautiful!

Thank you for the right advice

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An endearing, heartfelt verse. Lovely writing :)

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CHEERS!

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