DRIFTING AWAY - Original Verse

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)


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Drifting Away


Started it off real smooth
I ain't even plan to fall
I just left my ex
Tryna play and fuck around
But you got me stay
From your parents couch to marina bay
My feelings are so conflicted
I know none of it
You got me trippin' and I choose to stay

It's weird now we're drifting
Rough road, I am back on my parents coach
You slipped away I ain't even noticed it
I tried to blame the distance but it wasn't the case
Should I be suspicious?
I am falling too deep
And this story is full of twist
I don't know but you got me tripping
All these lSD won't help me coping

I've never been really in love
But you got me stayin'
You turned me up and I fall in love
And now you're slowly drifting away
Without me even noticing

I've got this jealousy
I acted foolishly
We were so damn insecure
I gripped too tight and you flew away
I am left with all these memories
I might used to be the one
But now I ain't no more

I've never been really in love
But you got me stayin'
you turned me up and I fall in love
Now you're drifting away
Without me even noticing

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Love your poetry...very beautiful and touching...wish I could write like this ^_^

Thank you so much ^^- it's pretty simple to write like that @leyla5

beautiful word, beautiful sentence made beautiful poetry , i like it

Very good poerty @macchiata. . Thankyou for sharing

nice poem... :)

Wow that has to be one of the best silhouette pictures I have seen! Great thumbnail. What i this a verse for? Are you writing a new song? :D You could create a rap, and then go on Philippines Got Talent (if you guy have that haha!)

Talk soon.

I've written similar things like Rap kind of thing but I am not good with beat and music. I plan to be a song writer :p
and whoever good with beat and music could probably use that verse. We have asian got talent! but I haven't that much of a courage to rap !

Thanks for a visit @enazwahsdarb :) great day dude

Hahaha all good :) That's awesome. Good to know you know what you want.

I will rap with the beats to your lyrics :P

Talk soon.

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