Thoughts that leaked out of my head years ago and were written down in the form of poetry? Maybe these words will cause you to stop and think?

in #poetry7 years ago

Time, once there, in lands far from away, delusional dreamers were.

Locations, human beings, in forms fair, therein blinked.

Confounded, places unbounded, thinking paused.

Streams, flowing expectations, not respected.

Desktop, icons with files, automatically opened.

Holes, darkness encircling, consciousness questioned.

Terror, one breathe after another, uninterrupted.

Heartbeats, new energy waves, warmth expanded.

Shrieking hiss, frozen stone, hope consumed.

Hands, curious movements, novelty sought.

Texture, familiar shapes, anxieties comforted.

Shining, contrasting reflections, focus sharpened.

Cold, frozen pain, words anticipated and rejected.

Friends, temporary pacifiers, loneliness abated.

Solitude, human identity, desperately explored.

Itching skin, compelling emotions, recklessly scratched.

Written words, burning yawns, subject, objects and verbs completed.

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wow. This really did cause me to think...

I love to reply poems with poems but your poem honestly feels to complete tor me to add anything but lemme try a line.

groping hearts and wrists pulsing, weakly stretched

Thank you! Poetry (or art in general) is about expanding our minds and hearts so it makes me happy that my words inspired you to also write another line of poetry. :)

True....

Poetry is the language of the heart
Through which the mind speaks its many thoughts
And the souls breaks its shackles apart

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