true education

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

true education

i hate to say this; you’re uneducated,
and every argument you make is something that was stated,
and after reading a headline, you’re educated?
give me a break; your choices are overrated.

let me rephrase it; you are lacking education.
consumerism is taking advantage of temptation.
some people die while other drown in celebration.
the world’s in desperate need of true education.

©LukaKorba

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With love,
Luka.

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Nice composition @lukakorba well said lines.

perhaps too many choices and influences from everywhere, leaves us living a superficial life. Not many masters are born. because no-one has the courage to explore the depth of ONE thing.
(?)

That is very accurate. We are influenced by so many things and are amateurs at almost everything but rarely dive deep into one. Hm, perhaps we need to explore and experiment in the beginning, find what resonates with us, and then go all in.

...like you do with your poetry. (?) these people are always most inspiring to me. Because they stand out from the mass...

They do, and I don’t know. Do I?

well... to me... here on steemit... you definitely do...

The world is deffinately in need of true education. Great composition. This would make a great song. I can almost hear it as I read it.

Self-educating is the first step towards strenghtening true education. Thank you! I kind of see it too, it can be both. :)

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