i bled for nine months
but the love we shared simply prepared
me for a heartbreak, an awful heart ache,
and if that is to return, what if i burn?
but since then i grew, and so did you.
i’m in a trance, if you gave me a chance,
a mere repeat, i’d be complete.
and you still call, making me fall
so, so deep. in my sleep
i dream about you. i can’t live without you.
go of this love, but i’m a dove.
dear, if you choose me, you’ll never lose me.
for nine months i bled, surprised i’m not dead.
damn luka, who this about?
G
Wow ! Powerful poetry with greatest message. I believe it is about unreturned love from your lover. The rhythm with five equal stanzas capture the message of the poem. Nice write up and nice expression
Take that can of Guinness and run my friend. In fact take the over sized Guinness hat too and find a bar as 'everyone is Irish tonight' and find yourself a new love, hell find several. I understand this writing comes from the heart but now it has been written and its time to move forward mate.