field of cotton

in #poetry7 years ago

field of cotton

my whole past fits on my wrist.
every bracelet is a list
of events i tend to toss
to the side and take the loss.

in the future i will see
that within my poetry
lies a world that is forgotten.
my mind is a field of cotton.

©LukaKorba

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With love,
Luka.

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Nice choice of words.
in the future i will see
that within my poetry
lies a world that is forgotten.
Very nice. Love it

Thank you so much! :) I’m glad you enjoyed it.

within my poetry
lies a world that is forgotten.
my mind is a field of cotton.

what beauty in the words............

:) Thank you for the love!

Nice composition @lukakorba....touched my heart....thank you for sharing the poetry.

Thank you for reading my friend! :)

nice image, nice pem and nice feel. thanks bro! @OriginalWorks

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No, thank you! :)

Simply wonderful. :) I cannot choose a line since I love all of them. ^^ Great poem @lukakorba. 😊

Woah! Thank you so much! This means a lot! :)

You're welcome! ^^~ You and your poems deserve it. :))

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