a sudden realisation
i was drowning in a lake and was resistant to the fake,
the illusory love which was bound to fall apart,
and now i can't feel this dart piercing through my heart,
for once again time stood still, and then i saw
something magical in your eyes, something raw.
lovely poetry
Thank you so much!
Excellent poem!!! Wow amazing!!! I love it
Thank you! What did you enjoy about it?
nicely written good to know a fellow poet and writer
Thank you! :)
Great composition @lukakorba you are an excellent worker.
Thank you so much! This means a lot!
what is this pic telling