a rose overdoselukakorba (63)in #poetry • 7 years ago a rose overdose burn a rose, overdose on a kiss full of bliss. in the fire, i admire cigarettes and my regrets. understand my lonely hand; my pen is here, but so is fear. i confess that i'm a mess; under clouds, my mind is loud. i detach a broken match and overdose on that rose. ©LukaKorba With love,Luka. #poem #writing #love #life
The rhymes alone is what kills me. You did a great job with just few words. Cheers
Thank you so much!
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