FAULTLESS
You fended all with a smile
I kicked and threw several fits
Yet love did flow from you
If there was another lie I could tell
To trick you into getting hurt
You’ll gladly believe my words
Walking open-eyed into my trap
I think you care too much
You say you care enough
I want you to show anger
But there’s none of such in you
I asked what I must do to continually earn this love you give
I wondered how I must act to remain worthy of you
You said to tell you another lie
And watch you love me still
THANK YOU
yours truly
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Damn! The ending was so powerful. This was simply entertaining to read. :)
Thank you, this poem is actually an expression of how I really do treat my friends. I thought how best to put it in words and this was the best I could do.
thank you for your kind words
I understand how difficult it is to try to put feelings into words. You did a wonderful job with the poem. :)
Thank you once again sire/ma'am ....
You're welcome, sir. :)
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That was really beautiful, I especially love the ending! Cheers and here's to many more beautiful poetry!
Thank you so very much ma'am...
Truly powerful, emotion-filled relation, where logic does not exist but only feelings. We all have some of those
Very true....
Thank you very much
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Absolutely beautiful, thank you for sharing this with us. It was a very enjoyable read indeed.
I am gladdened to know that ma'am.
I like how you transmit your message <3
Thank you so very much. Means a whole lot to me