SteemitPoetryContest 3 "A 1000 oceans and a sea"
How wonderful the sea when love meets ..
And how beautiful his unjustice is ..
when the memory of memories break ..
.. on the banks of his dreams ..
They say that the sea is vendicative ..
.. in the secrecy of his secrets ..
lost and confused ..
.. My love for him is bigger than a 1000 oceans .. and sea ..
Many said the sea is vendicative .. many said it hides secrets and more ..
Many said .. Selfish and Mighty ..
Many said .. and they said .. time and again ..
.. Although many said .. they all wrote poems on its shores ..
I know my english is horrible ..I keep thinking in 2 languages..at least :o
The sea is one of the most beautiful blessings of man, which indicates the greatness of the Creator, the tongue is unable to describe the beauty and charm which have been an inspiration to many poets and writers for ages and ages .. but the age of love .. is greater than our years .. :]
Here I tried the best I can to capture the essence of the sea .. perhaps my love and perplexity in front of it, the mind sometimes finds it hard to wrap it around from its immensity ..
so without divulging much in its details and characteristics I liked to "talk" about it if you will .. like many before me did and many after me will .. for 1000s and 1000s of seas and seas to come ..
I chose the punctuation intensely as you may have noticed for pausing but also representing the waves crashing on the shores .. changing boundaries each times .. I am using it even now .. I guess am still "immersed" in the sea and its unpredictability ..
So the poem came out in a random manner .. disordered but in order at the same time... no tsunami here .. ;p
The sea can't be contained but it contains the uncontainable ..ok, maybe I should stop here
.. you "sea" what I mean? .. ;p
Thank you so much for inspiring me to do this If it wasn't for contests like this I wouldn't have the courage to post it!!
Good luck to all!!!
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very nice :-)
Thanks!! :)