You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Laughing-stockView the full contextkillerflu (41)in #poetry • 7 years ago I really like the way you made "leaves" and "streets" rhyme. Not sure if you meant to do that.
Thanks, @killerflu. I use proximate or near rhyme sparingly but continually throughout my poems and even my stories. It sets up an inward music in the hearer's mind...or so I hope :)