Presence (An Original Poem)
Spinning me around like a top;
You keep me from careening off the palm of your hands
captivated
entrapped
imprisoned
by this situation.
by you.
eager for the next exchange.
I await it so fervently,
but patiently
It consumes the unfilled spaces
in my thoughts
in my heart
in my life
now there is a presence.
now there is you.
thanks for this post, good post
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Captivated
entrapped
imprisoned
by this situation
by you
Very awesome....I love it:)
thank you :3 and thanks for reading!
The pleasure is all mine...
Wow you write good :)
Nice once
I so much love this .... Well inked
Thank you so much! :3
"now there is you" I'm guessing that was the grand finale.
Excellent finish, 2 words that say it all.
Yes :3 I always try to give good finishes to my poems and stories
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