SteemitPoetryContest #11 THE MARTIAN
The urge for human amity grows as i forget what laughter sounds like
Hope for survival diminishing before my eyes
Watching days go by
And my sanity along with them
I gaze into the sky
The shooting star, my only hope
Making wishes upon wishes
If only wishes were horses
The red alien planet, serving as my new home
127 million miles from redemption
Alone and alone with my thoughts
The thoughts of being the martian
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Was this inspired by the book or the movie? Ultimately I think the theme is that in death, we are all alone, no matter where we are.
Hmm you almost got it right... The theme is about loneliness
This line
is what had me add the piece about death.
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