POEM: Shelter

in #poetry5 years ago

I've been digging up poetry from decades ago. This one immortalizes another questionable choice I made, but I can look back and smile now. Because I've changed.

If you missed my last post, and enjoy angsty misadventures in poetry, check it out.

Photo by Štefan Štefančík on Unsplash



Did it weigh you down,
The effort it took to hold me?
Did I ask too much?
Demanding was not my intention.
Before I took the breath,
I hesitated to think
Of the words that were suddenly
Like foreign sounds to a child.

So rarely fragile,
I was vulnerable for you,
Stepping through worn limitations,
Shedding the shell from truth.
I only thought, perhaps,
You possessed the desire to know.
Perhaps the knowledge
Will become the desire.

So kind you are
To leave me clutching hope.
Kindness in your comfort
Like a shelter.

Original writing by Katrina Ariel.


I like this one because it compares kindness to a shelter.

It took me a long time to realize that being vulnerable doesn't mean being weak, but way back when I wrote this I thought I was a badass with a thick skin, when really I was just playing tough. I've always been over sensitive. But that's okay.

I might not be proud of all the choices I've made in my life, but I'm stronger now, and that's something to be grateful for. I'm pretty good at giving myself a hard time for past mishaps, so it's nice when I can look back and laugh, or read a poem and realize at least I made art from the pain.

We are not the mistakes we've made, but what we've overcome to get this far gives us depth, and perhaps a little humility as well.

Thanks for reading.

Whatever happens, keep singing your song!

Peace. @katrina-ariel

Katrina Ariel

Author bio: Katrina Ariel is an old-soul rebel, musician, tree-hugging yogini, and mama bear to twins. Author of Yoga for Dragon Riders (non-fiction) and Wild Horse Heart (romance), she's another free-spirit swimming in the ocean of life. Check out her music here: https://choon.co/artists/katrina-ariel/


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Even if you wrote some of the poems with angst or thoughts that may not align with your current ay of thinking you have a skill at writing powerful and thought provoking poetry

Thank you! So true.

MOst welcome have a good evening ;)

Hi beautiful! Nice to cross your path today. And, to see you kicking a$$ doing your thing 💗 Good for you! Steem on friend!

Hi! Always good to hear from you. Thank you! Steem on!

Beautiful 💕🤗

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Reading it, I thought it sounded like post-breakup thoughts...
maybe I was wrong

Hmmm... You're close. If I recall, that one wasn't reciprocated. Oh well. Time heals. ;)

It is good to collide with this piece... I feel like I felt myself in some of your words. It's amazing how your vulnerability is out here pointing at my own 💕

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