Our Love Story (An Original Poem)
Trust is easily broken
Yet difficult to repair
Should we have put in more effort?
Instead of giving in to despair
Our story was meant to be never-ending
Our song was meant to last long
All our dreams lie shattered
The future we envisioned together is now gone
Is it your fault as much as it is mine?
Well, now there's no point in blaming
As we move on with our lives
We'll forever live with this guilt we're feeling
No, it cannot end this way, this fate can't be ours
Is it too late, or do we still have time?
Let's try this once more, and let's do it right!
Coz I'm yours, and you are meant to be mine
Mistakes are a part and parcel of our lives, we learn from them and we grow because of them. Sometimes, mistakes become the stumbling blocks in relationships as well. We fall only to rise, becoming stronger and wiser in the process. We should never give up - fighting for the things that make our lives beautiful is one of the greatest purpose to our existence. Sometimes, the best things in life come to those who try. If you want it, go get it!
Thank you for reading! @jznsamuel
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Beautifully written, so much meaningful... Thank you for sharing a good post...
thanks ma'am :)
I love how you wrote this one in two parts!
By changing the font it added more emotions. Thanks for sharing, what inspired all your poems?
thank you very much @kubbyelizabeth, appreciate your comment!
Probably it's a phase I'm going through, or maybe the overflowing emotions from deep within are trying to find release ;) Thanks for asking!
Wow! That's completely epic, irrevocable and sublime! :)
thank you! :)
Nice Poem @jznsamuel
Thank you!
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thanks for taking a bite ;)
Beautiful poetry with a tinge of sadness , it's depressing how mistakes can end a relationship or just not giving it ur best taking for granted what's there, I love the last verse , coz I'm urs and Ure meant to be mine !
Thank you, glad you liked it and got the emotions I wanted to convey :)
Very beautiful poem :) It's worth to give things a second chance - it makes you stronger!
Yes, certainly - stronger and wiser ! thanks...
very nice post and i really like this type of post.
nice :)
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