Rainbow

in #poetry4 years ago

A vivd poem by bcpoet.

'Rainbow' is such a splendid poem and I had to read it twice just to savor the mental pictures this poet allowed me to visualize.

The way this poet set up each line to make the next even more powerful and more in depth is beautiful and once you read it you will want to read it again.

It's just that beautiful.

Rainbow by bcpoet.

liquid prisms fall and tumble
in the distance there's a rumble
lightning flashes far away
someone somewhere has a day

with a rainbow in the sky
mystic arching omen high
above and out of reach
it's a sign that we are each

children, eyes full of wonder
alerted by the sounds of thunder
to the sky and its ethereal
living light which now we are all

allowed to glimpse for a while
realizing that the smile
now found on each face
is filled with meaning as we taste

electrostatic air behind
where the rain fell, where we find
ourselves now believing
even as the rain is leaving

we are one, we're a part
of all of life, from the start
and through our journeys every day
everywhere and every way

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/311259-rainbow/

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I like the poem, mostly the part that says

we are one, we're a part
of all of life, from the start
and through our journeys every day
everywhere and every way

Yes we are one, and we leave here for each other

Really splendid.
"We are one, we're a part
Of all of life, from the start".

These words provoke deep thoughts.
Thanks for sharing this @joseph

I love the rhyme at the end of each line
And each stanza paints a very vivid and beautiful description,sights of good poetry .Quite delightful

Beautiful poem. I loved the subtle way to describe feelings, emotions, people and situations that give a sublime nuance to each written word. Thanks for sharing writings like these. Excellent!

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