THE CENTRE OF NO BEGINNING (An Original Poetry ➕ Literary Appreciations & Poetic Analysis)
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On the nucleus of no navigation
the dawn is a sunset with no conscience
we live, strapped to lifelessness
like decease souls suffering disease
the mind is mad with maddening malady
But at the convergence of life's circumference
the beginning is just a denouement
an alignment with annihilation
where the spirit is weary
and the darkened nights are dreary
We're in a mist win no midst
tomorrow with no inkling of the future
the past is a shard with seizure
and today is a cataclysm
a colourless globe etched in scepticism
floating with concocted pomposity
yet the intellect is coaxed in dingy albinism
We're at the centre of no beginning
mindet slaughtered from the onset
gutted by impotence to dream dreams
papacy laced with leprosy
the instance is but a prolepsis
of a world without air or flowers
but men are singing sweet songs of melody
unaware of the gloom cooking
when doom is preparing to come
Time is a forerunner
that heralds the prologue of ruination
a sickening prognostication
of a ghastly cosmos coming furiously
yet men dine in wine and ignorance
like a tasteless poem with metaphor
the centre of no beginning
a step into the unknown
where mankind is wielding petals as swords
POETIC NOTES & ANALYSIS
THE CENTRE OF NO BEGINNING is a poem that paints a dimly lit world or existence where morality and order seems not to existing, a cosmos of timelessness where it seems the present, the future and the past is a fable but only convergence of wildlings and unruly men who lives aimlessly without a purpose for the moment.
The poet paints a place where is no where, a futuristic picture of what the earth may become if it continue in this way of damnation.
The poem criticized the ambition of men who set out to ruin the world and bring the apocalypse as a result of their orgies for sex, power and money which of course makes them butchers and murderers, of course a look at the current world does not support the poem but the poet is painting the happening that may eventually bring about the catastrophe to the human life.
The poem calls unto the concerned to stand up and save their world from perishing when others are bring the world to a naught.
The poem uses a lot of alliterations and imagery, to paint the happening he's predicting, then metaphors and simile to bring about comparison.
This is my entry to @margaretwise's poem challenge
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
15/9/2018
"Steemian Mantra"
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JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU
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The poet is a chosen one, an exceptional man who feels a certain vocation and mission, which he fulfills without looking at anything that would disturb him. My congratulations :)
Great writing.
I am honored @margaretwise
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