It's a lovely free verse, I love the simple Andy internal rhyme you used, it shaped into a perfect rhyme scheme as well. It's so calm and peaceful and well it illuminates as well just like the imagery of illuminaion you used between the poem verses
It's a lovely free verse, I love the simple Andy internal rhyme you used, it shaped into a perfect rhyme scheme as well. It's so calm and peaceful and well it illuminates as well just like the imagery of illuminaion you used between the poem verses