ODES & SERENADE {An Original Poetry } Day 76
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like the zapping freshness of ginger
to the tender tissues of my tongue
It's like shea butter to the sunset skin
listening to the sweetness from your jukebox divine
merrily gyrating me to a spiritual dance
as I watch the eyes of the stars glittering in glee.
On a breezy night, can I travel through you?
lost in windy wind of the troubled west?
stay ashore, in the tide abreast
like a guitar, rhythms traveling through you like a cigar?
It's like reggae and blues, a lovely cruise.
through the marine sweetness you possess.
oh to serenade you an eulogy till the end of time.
Princess of the evening, do well to reflect in the orange-ness of the sun.
When the horny evening is come
The flutes speaks of your beauty profound.
like a pinch of flattery eaten with pride
allow your eardrums, be treated to a feast.
of instruments celestial,
the turmoils of the storms;
and the platelets of bellows raving inside
like a clusters of strings and bars
Making love to my beauty delight
tending and soothing her, like her Majesty bestows
all night long, outside your verandah.
ANALYSIS
Odes are generally poems that are used to praise, serenade however is also a synonym however, somewhat like a version done at night, under the illumination of the moon and the stars.
there are uses of alliteration and similes, a little bit of heightened imageries, and it rhymes particularly unschemed and unprepared.
POET'S & NOTE.
Obviously an Ode in nature, this poem is used to really praise a woman, obviously not present however the descriptives shows she was in a house sleeping at night, and some set of instruments were played to sooth her, in fact it was starting to become a lullaby, however the writer's aim was absolutely to make her feel special by rendering series of songs In her honour
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
22/5/2018
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JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU
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